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It's a portrait of the "Wise Guys" a german a cappella/vocal pop group which is quite successful in Germany. They are five of the few musicians I've actually seen live on stage (well worth it, by the way).
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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This is quite good. the anatomy and the expressions are great. The only fault I can find is the fact that their shirts and hair fade into the background. It could probably be fixed by darkening the shading on them so their closer in tone to their faces. Other that that, this is great! The composition is good, and, as I said before, so is their expression and the anatomy.
Well done!
The other man in the front looks pretty good, to me, too, however his other eye and eyebrow look a little odd in comparison to the other eye and eyebrow. Like... His eyebrows are in an odd line. I know there are people with unsymmetrical faces like that, but it still srikes to me as odd. The way his ear connects to his head looks a little awkward to me, too.
The man in the middle of the back line has also something about the shape of his head and the positioning of his left ear (from our point of view) but I can't exactly put my finger on it.
The comporition works and the shading of their heads is excellent! I'm a little sad that their bodies aren't shaded as strongly, if you know what I mean. It might be the scanning, but the shading of the clothes needs some darker areas in my opinion.
The hands of the man with the microphone look very good and realistic! I like the way you've shaded his left hand, holding the microphone
The shading of the hand of the man in front of him also looks very good. There appears to be something about the rest of the men's hands, though. Some of their fingers look kind of awkward to me and maybe you could've used slightly more shading.
I would've also paid more attention to knuckles, but it might just be a personal preference.
I hope you'll stick to pencils because I admire the way this picture seems to have a lot of life to it in my opinion
I put some thought into the shading and darkness of the piece. You pointed out correctly that their clothes don't have as detailed shading. I wanted to have the focus on their expressions and hands (that's also why the hair is only suggested) and I already darkened the clothes several times, but I know what you mean. I'll see whether I can put in some darker shadows here and there
Anyways, thanks a lot, comment's such as yours is why #GimmeFeedback is such an awesome group
Ich kenne mich mit Realismus getz nicht so aus, weshalb ich mich mal nicht groß an Kritik versuche, sorry...